Simply sublime .. madhu .. brilliantly poignant .. brilliantly touching tale of love .. each & every emotion jumps out at the reader .. loved it to bits ..
Really nice. You described his anguish over leaving her so well, Dhaddhi was still around, no wonder Anjali never got over Shyam, to forgive Kushi...not that Khushi was ever at fault. The old had still as bitter as always...
I loved that they both still wore their rings, and finally meeting each other no words of anger.
no words Madhu....simply no words.....just plain brilliant....so emotional & heart touching....
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I loved it,,, kahin to mile finally,,,
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Simply sublime .. madhu .. brilliantly poignant .. brilliantly touching tale of love .. each & every emotion jumps out at the reader .. loved it to bits ..
ReplyDeleteawww...so sweet..amazing!!
ReplyDeleteit touched my heart...beautiful description madhu!!
loved it!
aditi07
Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteIt soothed my soul.
Thank you so much :)
very nice... I had a big smile through out the SS..
ReplyDeleteI'm smiling and crying all at the same time... I don't know what to say... u have successfully rendered a loquacious person like me, speechless...
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ReplyDeletequite emotional
Really nice. You described his anguish over leaving her so well, Dhaddhi was still around, no wonder Anjali never got over Shyam, to forgive Kushi...not that Khushi was ever at fault. The old had still as bitter as always...
ReplyDeleteI loved that they both still wore their rings, and finally meeting each other no words of anger.
Its mind blowing...
ReplyDeleteVery nice....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteNerve shattering story
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